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Thursday, 25 February 2010

My Holiday


The start of our new holiday
I have a list of stuff to do,
But I don't think my list is long enough
For the six weeks I'm heading through.

Riding is at the top
Sailing through the grass,
Knocking over the farmer
In my attempt to be world class.

And somewhere along the line
Ryan will insist,
To get on his big green motorbike
I'm not looking forward to this.

But soon it will be all over
I'll have to go back to school,
With all my lumps and big red bumps
I'll look like such a fool.

Morgan (Year 8)

2 comments:

  1. Morgan, that's stunning work. You manage to tell the narrative while still keeping the rhyme - a real talent!

    Allana
    Team Endeavour

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  2. Morgan, I like your poem. It is wonderful and you could not have made it better. I like the way you made it rhyme.

    From Maddie & Tanna
    http://springstonteamenterprise.blogspot.com/

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