Welcome everybody! We are a group of Year 7/8 students at Springston School who are connecting to our learning and meeting new challenges. Our teachers are Wendy and Mr T.
Jerked around to a rubble mess Attacked by water ten feet tall Panic spreads across the land A power that can’t be controlled Never will this country be the same
A nice poem, Courtney. I like the clarity with which you've written it. You may want to alter the reference to "water ten feet tall" because the tsunami was a lot taller than that, and we would measure it in metres, not feet. You might like to do a quick Google search for the Japanese Tsunami, and you'll soon find how much bigger it was at its worst.
A nice poem, Courtney. I like the clarity with which you've written it. You may want to alter the reference to "water ten feet tall" because the tsunami was a lot taller than that, and we would measure it in metres, not feet. You might like to do a quick Google search for the Japanese Tsunami, and you'll soon find how much bigger it was at its worst.
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I really like your poem Courtney.
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