Heres my example:
Young and Dumb
As she skipped along the path her long, blonde, silky hair blew in the wind. She came to the door, banged and crashed but no one was home. So she stormed in. Goldilocks was young and dumb and very impulsive, she was so careless she destroyed their house. First she gobbled up Papa bears porridge into her mouth but didn't like it because it was too hot. Next she crammed Mumma bears but it was too cold. Finally she strode to Baby Bears and it was just right.
Stomping her feet against the floorboards she reached the chairs. Sits on all of them, breaks one, and makes herself at home!
Yawning her head off she finds three beds...
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