Scene Description - The boy and the birds

In the past few weeks Sonic have been looking at fairytales. Specifically describing a scene. Here is my scene description:

The Boy and the Birds 

The young boy exits the tree he once entered. He looks up and he'd never seen it so beautiful.

The sunlight was peeking through the trees and the wind was whistling. You could only hear the chirping birds and the buzzing insects. The birds followed him as he crossed the wooden bridge. It squeaked as it broke the deafening silence. The boy then wandered up to the the nearest tree and he ran his hand along it. He could feel the soft moss as it passed through his hand. After that he carefully sits down on a rock and he curiously looks forward and beyond the green bush. His eyes widen.

The boy jumps up startled and he then streams down the dry dirt and along the twisted path. The birds are still following him and as he gets closer he sees…

  
Picture by Yngve Martinussen - Digital Art